You will notice throughout my blog, THE TEMPLATE, that I often begin emails with:
Technically, I should also put a comma after “Hi” so it would be:
Looks weird, right? I know. The two commas throw me off.
Now maybe an English teacher would disagree, but this is where I “learn the rules and break them.”
I think it’s cleaner and less distracting to go with:
Rules and structure matter, but so does readability. And you don’t want to distract the email recipient right from the jump.
For me, it’s “Hi” and then the person’s name followed by a comma.
That’s my story, and I’m sticking to it.
And finally…why do I use “Hi”? Again, it’s a gut feeling on the best “intro” word for the majority of business situations.
The other options don’t feel right.
Hello: too flat and impersonal
Hey: too comfortable
Dear: too formal
Hey Hey: don’t even think about it
And if I don’t have the person’s name, I go with “Hi there,”
Safe, courteous and won’t rub the person the wrong way.
December 13, 2016
The email that landed me a response 9 out of 10 times.
January 16, 2017
Glowing remarks from someone who has seen PLENTY of writing guides.